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Here's a complicated keening
a wounded widow melody that marches
short of meaning
through the stealthily receding
sounds of solitary breathing
leaving naught-at-alls retreating
from the never-really-there
Deep below the bitten rivers
a calm and callous mockery of gifts that
doom the givers
break the broken into slivers
while the raven day delivers
gives her gasping while she shivers
in the cold October air
a wounded widow melody that marches
short of meaning
through the stealthily receding
sounds of solitary breathing
leaving naught-at-alls retreating
from the never-really-there
Deep below the bitten rivers
a calm and callous mockery of gifts that
doom the givers
break the broken into slivers
while the raven day delivers
gives her gasping while she shivers
in the cold October air
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once upon a time, a young boy lived in a house, plagued by illness.
"I looked upon the scene before me - upon the mere house, and the simple landscape features of the domain - upon the bleak walls - upon the vacant eye-like windows - upon a few rank sedges - and upon a few white trunks of decayed trees - with an utter depression of soul which I can compare to no earthly sensation more properly than to the after-dream of the reveller upon opium - the bitter lapse into everyday life - the hideous dropping off of the veil. There was an iciness, a sinking, a sickening of the heart - an unredeemed dreariness of thought which no goading of the imagination could torture into aught of the sublime. What was it - I paused to think - what was it that so unnerved me in the contemplation of the House of Usher?"
the raven and the beating heart still remain some of my many faves of poe!
a posie for poe!
:)
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Nice. I like it! Interesting word groupings. But did you mean "break the broken into slivers," rather than "silvers?"
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Thanks for the reply. I'm pretty sure it says "slivers" up there... it should anyway.
And I'm glad the Poe references got through. I wrote the poem to commemorate the day he died. (In October, on the way to meet his fiancee, of what doctors now think was advanced stage rabies.)
Did you actually mean The Tell-Tale Heart?
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