• Jon

  

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  Re: Undone

  07/11

  strong piece Eileen, thanks for sharing it...
  
  I bet it is even better spoken, performed than just on the page...has a lot of good beat, internal music to it...
  
  over on the Haiku board we've got one poet who is a national performance champ...
  
  I used to perform on the cafe scene, but haven't done too much in the last ten years (old man now! - 47!)
  
  
  

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• • Eileen

    

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    Re: Undone

    07/11

    thanks, Jon your understanding of its' music is -- exciting ... yeah, i think I'll use it for our upcoming GOLD show! i think my work is often better spoken than written ... glad of your response! E

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  • • Jon

      

      48

      Re: Undone

      07/12

      ah, you are taking me back to the good old days of being on the scene and performing...
      
      totally jealous...
      
      have some fun with your shows!

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